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MadGuy
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:50 am |
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| JD. The Hero. The Legend. |
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Joined: Sun May 04, 2008 12:52 pm Posts: 40500 Location: Craphole Island Highscores: 2
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Noah- I am sick to death of hearing this.
*Noah shoots Liria in the head. The radio falls off the shelf and into the tub as Helen screams and drops the baby.
*Garrett goes for Noah's gun and kicks his hand, knocking it out.
*Hell grabs her mother, screaming. Garrett sees it all and the baby and screams and punches Noah. He looks for the gun and doesn't see it. He punches Noah in the face with all his might over and over again.
*Suddenly, Liv comes into the room with the gun and shoots Noah point blank screaming. Everyone is screaming at this point. Garretts face is covered in Noah's brains and blood.
Liv- Noone will EVER HIT ME AGAIN! Not you..Not my Mom..NOONE! *She shoots him again and again and turns the gun on herself.
*Garrett tackles Liv as Helen is still screaming and the last bullet goes into the wall.
Holy fucking Christ
I love what you did with Liv though, you made her more 'human'.
It's a shame to see Noah go so early 
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EyesPaintedBlack
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 7:07 pm |
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| Do I Get Points, If I Act Like I Care? |
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Joined: Sun May 04, 2008 5:31 pm Posts: 1417
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JD- Natty, what's wrong?
Natasja- FINE! Wanna know what's wrong? I don't trust her. Lets take away the fact that she's a redhead and think about the situation. Suddenly, she's in town. She's very hush hush about why and suddenly she's drudging up old memories of people neither one of you are anymore.
Whahahahahah. Awesome.
Natasja- (smacks him in the face) Fuck you, JD. I wouldn't be jealous of you if you were a urinal and I was living in a river of piss.
Whahaha. I love myself.
Natasja- Of course I would.
Angelito- Jd is always the one you liked more though.
Natasja- (in a moment of realization) Angel....
Aww, Angel.
JD- Natty, why are you so jealous? It's fucking embarassing. Why don't you stay?
Natasja- Why don't you go jump off a cliff like your father did, you son-of-a-bitch?
I love the drama, and the swearing. Keep it up.
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:27 am |
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| Miss Spank-A-Lot |
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Joined: Tue May 06, 2008 9:48 pm Posts: 2508 Location: Jacksonville, FL
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Hellsing wrote: Jim- SHUT UP! My first question for you is WHY? Why do you act the way you do to people? Ben- Because its who I am. Jim- Oh but its not. You don't know anything about who you are. Thats why you hate those of us who do.
nice writing there.
Thanks. I was trying to get some of my personal feelings out in this scene and I liked the way it came across.
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:29 am |
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Hellsing wrote: Jim- You are sick. You are so seriously sick. Ben- So is everyone else Jim. There is no such thing as a healthy human being. call me crazy, but I really like the Ben character 
I enjoyed writing for the Ben character as well. It jsut seemed like the right thing to do given the circumstances so I will just move on and leave this as it is. Glad you liked the character though. 
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:30 am |
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Hellsing wrote: Jim- Can't do that, Ben. I need to harass you like you harassed me. Destroy your hopes and dreams like you did to me. 
Thanks JD! 
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:32 am |
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Hellsing wrote: Jim- What are your last words? (aims gun at his head) Ben- Everything is transparent when you look long enough, Jim. Jim- I agree. And Fuck You. *Shoots Ben in the neck *Ben starts spewing blood and falls to the floor. He tries to crawl himself toward the bedroom to get to his beloved. Jim comes up behind him and shoots him in the back three times. Ben- (staring toward the bedroom) I am coming back to you. Jim- (Interjecting) No you're not! *Shoots him point blank *Ben falls to the ground dead. Camera pans to Ben's beloved as we hear Jim in a muffled cry.
holy shit. fucking loved that scene.
Thanks. I wanted to repeat a line he said in an early episode.
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:34 am |
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Hellsing wrote: France- And I was high as a kite. I would've laughed if terrorists bombed your mattress. 
 I wished I had had time for more of them this episode but I cut some of them out. They will be more apparent next episode though.
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:36 am |
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Hellsing wrote: ***JD and Natasja are doing yoga in the living room. Sorry but that image just cracks me up 
My thinking with it is as much as these two love to look their very best, this would be one of their rituals together and that was my reasoning. The way its written though it is funny to imagine.
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:38 am |
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Hellsing wrote: Natasja- A proper date? What's that to you? Using a condom? Rolz 
After I read back over it AGAIN I definetly enjoyed some of Nattys lines the best.
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:40 am |
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Hellsing wrote: Natasja- (smacks him in the face) Fuck you, JD. I wouldn't be jealous of you if you were a urinal and I was living in a river of piss. 
Case in point to last comment. 
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:41 am |
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Hellsing wrote: Natasja- You have to admit you've fucked over some people. JD- With What? Honesty? That JD guy is cool 
Isn't he though? 
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noahcrash
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:42 am |
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Hellsing wrote: JD- The only way I am settling down is if Brad Pitt and Anjelina Jolie are merged genetically into one person and add their salaries together. (smiles) Natasja- (trying to keep calm) Fuck! You'd be more likely to be their newest adopted Colombian baby. *dies* 
I knew you'd like that. 
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